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Can she spend the night?
A little-girl question.
An interesting question.
Well tell me, child,
is it hers to spend?
Indigo currency to
be payed at dawn?
If the answer is yes
then she may buy the sun.
If it is no
then she is welcome to stay
but cannot use the stars.
©2004-2009 ~sodacanofjustice
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like...a one minute poem. i know it's not whimsical or whatever, and in theme it's not really a children's poem-but it's addressed to a child, so there you go.

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:iconoceanmemories:
oh, but it is so a childs poem
(is not)
is so
(is not)
IS SO INFINITY

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:iconsodacanofjustice:
heh. thanks? or not? um..i'm mindboggled.

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:icongraveunicorn:
LOL the above comment is very umm. intresting.

I like this poem! keep it up :P

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:iconsodacanofjustice:
thanks

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:iconmutedstatic:
I really and truly like this. Honestly your style is very interesting.

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:iconsodacanofjustice:
well thankee much. i write weird things sometimes.

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